My Comments On My Friends' Journals

                       Dear Şerif,

First of all, I would like to say that I liked your journal. It was a pleasure for me to read it. As for my comments, your journal does not bore me because you put related photographs in your paragraph. It is well-organized. Your writing is fluent. Firstly, you have clarified the definition of a university and what being an ideal university requires. Then, you have started to talk about METU in terms of an ideal one. I totally agree with your ideas, and I appreciate that you express yourself and your ideas explicitly. There are slight grammar mistakes, but they do not cause trouble. I believe that if you make effort, you can write better. I have expected a different journal, you may add the challenges as a new member of METU, but it is not bad in its current state. Thanks for your effort:) To 'Ideal University'

Dear Tuğrul,

I liked reading your journal. It is unified and coherent. You have expressed your ideas clearly,and you have also supported your point by using suitable examples.I felt as if my parents were talking when I read your journal because you warn us against hazards of online friendships. It is not hard for me to follow the flow of your ideas. You have a fluent style. I agree with your ideas to a great extent. It is pleasure for me to read your journal. Your language use is not problematic. However, you should pay attention to use of ‘because’. You should avoid using fragments. Thanks for your effort :) To ' Online Friendships'

Dear Tuğçe,

First of all, I would like to say that I enjoyed reading your journal. I am also a fan of Jane Austen. I love all of her books. Therefore, it is really nice to make comment on your journal. As for ‘Pride and Prejudice’, it is a wonderful book as you said. You have conveyed your ideas about it directly. When I read your journal, I felt as if I was reading it again. You have mentioned your reasons clearly. Your entry is coherent and unified. You have a sincere style. Moreover, you have used English correctly to a great extent. The dancing part in the video is the most outstanding part of the movie. Thanks for your effort :) To 'Pride and Prejudice'

Dear Seda,

Firstly, I want to say that your journal is enjoyable. It is also an interesting one. You have mentioned about the topic in a detailed way. I have gained much information thanks to your journal. You have supported your entry by using a suitable video. You have a fluent style. Its being accepted as eight wonder of the world has startled me. You have used language correctly to a great extent. However, you should pay more attention to subject-verb agreement and the use of active-passive clauses. If we have such a chance, we go together, and see. Thanks for your effort :) To 'Underground Army'