In the article called ‘ The Real
Way To Succeed’, the writer emphasizes that success is not a destination, but
the journey itself while we are trying to reach our goals in life. Moreover, he
thinks that we should use our potential to the highest point; however, we
should not expect somebody to lose for us to win while doing so. Instead of
trying to be perfect, we should try to be the best we can be. He also reflects
that if we do not just focus on our individual success, and if we work
cooperatively, the whole world will be a better place to live for all of us. I
totally agree with the writer because I think our success does not mean that somebody should
lose, and we should not be obsessed with perfectionism while we are having our
journey to our highest potential. First of all, the writer suggests focusing
only on being the best we can be. I agree with the writer, but we always try to be better than other people,
and we are always ready to do whatever is necessary for this. We would prefer
to be in competition with others than with ourselves, and this feeling of being
better than others or being perfect causes us to feel more stressed. However,
if we were the best we could be, we would feel less stressed and happier.
Therefore, we should avoid being obsessed with perfection. Secondly, the writer
stresses ‘ We teach people how to treat us’. I strongly agree with this idea
because I believe that we are the ones who will decide how close we will be,
and we have the right to put an end to our relationship when there is a
problem. I also think that people can only harm you when you allow them to do.
Thirdly, the writer says ‘ You can be a leader in the world, in your own
special way, by refusing to follow the crowd and acting from a position of love
versus one of fear’. In my opinion, we should not lose our differences while we
are trying to win because they are the things which make us unique. We should
discover our own path and follow it without fear of losing or obsession with
being better than others. To sum up, our success is the journey we have while
we are trying to reach our highest potential, and we live in a happier world if
we give up being in competition with others during this journey.
DEAR ESRA;
YanıtlaSilWhile I was reading this, I could not find anything bad or wrong.I also write about the same topic. Every idea you put into is well-considered and well-researched. You approach this topic with all aspects and define it in very clear way. The way of language using is also perfect. You must have put too much effort in it. I really enjoyed.
Thanks for everything :)