Dear Ayla,
Firstly, I want to say that I really liked your journal.It
was not boring. It caught my attention from the first sentence. Moreover,
you’ve expressed your reasons precisely, and you’ve supported your reasons by
talking about the plot and giving specific examples. Your work is unified and
coherent. It is easy for me to follow your ideas. You have a fluent style and
your use of language is not problematic. Your visuals and videos are also
helpful. I will watch the movie as soon as possible. Thanks for your sharing :)
( journal)
Dear Emel,
It is enjoyable for me to read your reflection because your
style is very fluent and your work can be smoothly read. You have used language
in a proper way. I liked your use of different expressions like ‘standing on
one’s own legs’. Your organization is also nice. The summary of the writer’s
idea and your perspective are well-combined. There is not a problem about unity
and coherence in your journal. Your visual material is really suitable for your
work. Having your own key to success in your mind is very important. Thanks for
your effort :) (article)
Dear Özge,
I want to say that it is a pleasure for me to read your
reflection because it is really sincere and easy to read. You have approached
to the issue from a different perspective and you have compared the situation
with Turkey. It has become really nice since I am completely familiar with the
things you’ve mentioned. You have also expressed the writer’s idea clearly.
Your visual materials are outstanding. Your reflection is unified and coherent,
and there is not any big mistake about grammar. It is a well-prepared work.
Thanks for your effort :) ( article)
Dear Şerif,
First of all, I would like to say that you have talked about
a very trend topic. While reading your journal, I felt as if you were a
columnist. Your style is informative and friendly at the same time. You have
explained everything by giving reasons, and this makes your journal persuasive.
It is very nice to give tips. They are handy ones. I think it is a good idea to
warn people against the dangers of summer. Even if there are some slight
mistakes in your language use, I liked your journal. It is unified and
coherent. Your visuals are also funny, especially ‘Yaz sıcakları bunaltıyor’
one. Thanks for your sharing:) ( journal)
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